Sentence # 17

[misanagi]

17. Tears

After believing profoundly, for so many years, that boys don't cry, Duo had been very confused at how easily the tears came when he was with Quatre, and even more puzzled at how Quatre, instead of trying to make him stop, cried right along with him.

Comments

[merith.livejournal.com]

oh and now, i want to cry! oh mis... this is just so true. i can see him doing that one day, just letting it out and duo would only be able to with someone he trusted completely, someone he loved and knew cared for him as well.

*hugs*

so sweet and beautiful!

[ginalin.livejournal.com]

Everyone needs a friend like that.

[sharona1x2.livejournal.com]

Sometimes, it's easier to do that with friends than with lovers. *hugs*

[darthanne.livejournal.com]

I love this.

I can just imagine them doing this too. :)

I'm so pleased you're writing them as friends in this - you have thier relationship so spot on.

[lil-1337.livejournal.com]

*hugs them both* That was really sweet! Shows a lot about them in a very few words.

[dysis.livejournal.com]

I love all your sentences - you have the characterization down so perfectly - but this one just made my heart twist. How beautiful.

*hugs just because*