Sentence # 17

[misanagi]

17. Tears

After believing profoundly, for so many years, that boys don't cry, Duo had been very confused at how easily the tears came when he was with Quatre, and even more puzzled at how Quatre, instead of trying to make him stop, cried right along with him.

Comments

[merith.livejournal.com]

oh and now, i want to cry! oh mis... this is just so true. i can see him doing that one day, just letting it out and duo would only be able to with someone he trusted completely, someone he loved and knew cared for him as well.

*hugs*

so sweet and beautiful!

[misanagi.livejournal.com]

Everyone needs to let go once in a while, and the person who's with you there makes all the difference in the world. I can see them trusting each other so much to be able to do that.

*hugs back* I'm glad that you liked it.

[ginalin.livejournal.com]

Everyone needs a friend like that.

[misanagi.livejournal.com]

Good friends are the greatest possible gift.

[sharona1x2.livejournal.com]

Sometimes, it's easier to do that with friends than with lovers. *hugs*

[misanagi.livejournal.com]

The first draft for this sentence was along the lines of Duo thinking how even though he's been with Heero for a long time, he still goes to Quatre when he needs to cry. But then I thought it sounded as if Heero wasn't understanding enough, which wasn't my intention at all, and since this was only supposed to be a sentence long, there was no time to explain. So I rewrote it ^_^ But I find it cool that you noticed the intention even though I didn't write it. *hugs*

[darthanne.livejournal.com]

I love this.

I can just imagine them doing this too. :)

I'm so pleased you're writing them as friends in this - you have thier relationship so spot on.

[misanagi.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad that you like it. I think they make great friends and I hope I'm doing them justice with these sentences.

[lil-1337.livejournal.com]

*hugs them both* That was really sweet! Shows a lot about them in a very few words.

[misanagi.livejournal.com]

*hugs them too* Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it.

[dysis.livejournal.com]

I love all your sentences - you have the characterization down so perfectly - but this one just made my heart twist. How beautiful.

*hugs just because*

[misanagi.livejournal.com]

Thank you, Dysis, I'm glad that you are enjoying them. They are fun to write.

*hugs back* ^_^