Writer’s block

[misanagi]

The epilogue of ‘The Findings of Earth’ is giving me a hard time.

I know exactly what I want to write, I had it planed for months! But now, I try to write it and I haven’t been able to write one sentence I like. I’m late; I should have posted the epilogue this week but I’m having such a hard time with it. I don’t want to post a mediocre ending just because I didn’t take the time to write it the way I wanted it to be. I’ve been writing this story for a little over a year (and even more if you count the prequel), it deserves a good ending!

It also deserves a good beta read but I’ll worry about that later.

*hears the song playing* I think my MP3 player is trying to give me some advice...

Comments

[misanagi.livejournal.com]

You and me both! Hiko teasing Kenshin is priceless! Kenshin is this very strong and caring person that everyone respects (even if they tease him or hate him)but Hiko is above him.

I love the 'baka deshi' thing, how confident is Hiko and the parts when Kenshin is training with him before fighting with Shishio. Kenshin training has to be one of my favorite parts of the series. Hiko cares about Kenshin but also works very hard to hide it...

That's why I like your story so much! You have Hiko, Kenshin and Kenji! There are so few good Hiko stories. So go and post more soon! I promise I'll give you feedback!

[ginalin.livejournal.com]

That's why I wrote the Hiko story. There are only a few out there, and I figured if I wanted more, I'd have to write it myself!

Hiko is rather grandfatherly toward Kenji, although he's a bit young to be Kenshin's own father. He's only 13 years older than Kenshin.
That means that when he found a 7 or 8 year old orphaned Kenshin, he was only in his early twenties himself. Not many young adventurous men would be that compassionate, to take in an orphan. I think that says more about Hiko than anything. He's a very honorable person, above and beyond everything else.