444 Ficlet

Mar. 17th, 2006 02:31 am
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You'll Never Walk Alone
By Misanagi


Rating: PG
Pairing/Character: Gen / Duo and Quatre
Summary: Duo walks into a bar to meet a friend.
Warnings: Angst
Word Count: 542

Notes: for the 444 on [livejournal.com profile] sdqb. Prompt #5: Stagger.

Thanks to Anne for the quick beta.

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Duo entered the bar and stood in the hallway. He took off his wet coat and used the sleeve of his shirt to dry his forehead. His hair was dripping and his pants were wet. He moved his fingers slowly, trying to get feeling back into them. The bar was warm and Duo wondered if he could stay there until the rain stopped. Going out again into that cold weather wasn't something he was looking forward to.

After only taking two steps into the bar Duo saw him. Quatre was sitting at the piano, playing a slow melancholic tune. His jacket and tie were nowhere in sight. His shirt wasn't tucked and two top buttons were undone. Quatre's eyes were closed and his head tilted back slightly, while his fingers moved expertly over the keys.

Someone called his name and Duo turned towards the bar. He recognized the bartender, Mike. It had been him who had called Duo at three o'clock in the morning, on a Thursday night to come pick Quatre up.

Leaning over the bar Duo asked, "How long has he been there?"

Mike poured an elderly man a shot of brandy and moved towards Duo. "He arrived around ten. Sat at his usual booth and ordered scotch on the rocks. One after another until around eleven. He stopped for a couple of hours and then ordered another two before Alfonse left and he took the old man's place at the piano. He has been playing since."

Duo sat on a stool and just watched Quatre for a little while.

"The manager didn't want me to call you," Mike said. "Customers stay longer, drink more, when he plays."

"Yeah," Duo nodded. "He makes you listen, even if you don't want to." He put his wet coat on the bar. "Can you hold this for me?"

Mike nodded and Duo thanked him before walking towards the piano. He stood beside it and watched Quatre's fingers dance over the keys; it never ceased to amaze him how they never slipped, no matter how many glasses of scotch Quatre had drunk.

Quatre looked like hell. There were bruises under his eyes, tired lines on his face and his back was tense. The music alone spoke loudly of Quatre's exhaustion. He was draining and this was his way to call for help.

"You are too quiet, Duo. It's not like you." Quatre's eyes were still closed but his head was tilted in Duo's direction.

Duo laughed softly. "Well yeah, I didn't want to interrupt."

Quatre's eyes opened. "You never do." His voice sounded fine but the unfocused look in his eyes gave him away. "You came to take me home?"

"Yeah… when you're ready to go."

The song came to an end, but almost immediately another started. It was still melancholic but the pace was faster, more desperate. "Just one more," Quatre said, closing his eyes again.

Duo put a hand on Quatre's shoulder and squeezed. "As many as you need, buddy."

Later that night, Duo would put an arm around Quatre's waist and help him out the bar. They would walk in the rain – Quatre always insisted on walking – progressing slowly through the streets, Duo holding Quatre, and Quatre letting himself be held.


- The End -

Date: 2006-03-17 08:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raletha.livejournal.com
Fabulous. I enjoy so much the way you write their friendship, and I especially like how you leave the source of Quatre's melancholy under the surface. And Duo just understands.

Date: 2006-03-17 05:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com
Thank you! I really like writing Quatre and Duo as close friends. I didn't want to spell out what was happening to Quatre, just show a moment between them when they both understand each other, and the reader just gets to look.

I'll stop rambling now... Thanks a lot for the comment. *hugs*

Date: 2006-03-17 11:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sharona1x2.livejournal.com
Very nice use of the theme. I'm sure I don't have to tell you how much I enjoyed the non-pairing. Those two just feel so right as good friends. They balance each other well. I love the image of Quatre playing piano with his eyes closed.

Date: 2006-03-17 05:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com
*grins* I'm so happy that you liked it. I really like writing friendship, it just seems so very right for them. I have to admit that I kind of wrote this for the image of Quatre drunk behind the piano... couldn't resist ^^;;

Date: 2006-03-17 05:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kedriaa.livejournal.com
Oh! That was so sweet and touching!

Feeling sad for Quatre but knowing Duo is there for him makes me feel better.

Date: 2006-03-17 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com
Thank you!

It was sad but I wanted to show how good is to have someone in those sad moments.

Thank you for the comment.

Date: 2006-03-17 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mysticblue-lady.livejournal.com
This is so sweet. And it makes me think, too. Is Quatre pining for someone or something? Or is this just the result of too much hard work for too long? It's hard to tell, but beautifully poignant. Really loved it :).

Date: 2006-03-17 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it. I like to keep unsaid what was/is bothering Quatre,,, its good to keep people wondering sometimes ^_^

Date: 2006-03-17 08:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crystal-cave.livejournal.com
I like it. It's so sad but without beeing depressing - good work!

The descriptions are very good, the atmosphere is really beliveable. And I think Quatre and Duo are in character.

And now I'm wondering what Quatre's playing... :)

Date: 2006-03-17 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm happy that you liked it.

I'm glad that the atmospheree worked. I really wanted to build that. And nothing makes me happier that knowing Quatre and Duo are in character.

In my head, Quatre's playing soft jazz tunes. ^_^

Date: 2006-03-18 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crystal-cave.livejournal.com
In my head, Quatre's playing soft jazz tunes

I like that - I'm a great fan of jazz-music!

Hmmm ... perhaps he's playing "In a sentimental mood" or "Born to be blue" ?

Anyway - thank you for sharing! :)

Date: 2008-07-13 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tyreling.livejournal.com
Really nice fic. I love their friendship here, the feel around the fic and the words, although not much, exudes quiet companionship. I love this side. Poor Quatre. He's going through a lot.

Date: 2008-07-14 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com
*pets Q* Yeah, this is an angsty one but I'm just happy the friendship came through.

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