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3. Soft

Some nights the soft sounds of a violin would wake Duo up, making him walk barefoot to the music room, ready to stand in the dark and wait for Quatre to finish the song; some other nights Quatre would wake up just knowing that Duo was pacing in the back yard, and then, putting on a jacket and taking one for Duo, he would walk out, ready to pace in silence beside his friend the entire night… in the mornings, no one would mention the tears.
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This one was difficult. *collapses*

Date: 2005-12-12 12:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merith.livejournal.com
between you and lil and ral, i'm a bawling teary mess! such fantastic insight for these characters -- lil and her rose garden, ral and her sentences on quatre and trowa. *sniff* man... you guys...

Date: 2005-12-12 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lil-1337.livejournal.com
That so much in so few words. I'm so glad you are doing this!

Date: 2005-12-12 12:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sharona1x2.livejournal.com
Oh man, that one really tugged at my heart. Beautifully written.

Date: 2005-12-12 12:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raletha.livejournal.com
The quiet support and understanding between them is beautiful. There's so much acceptance in their friendship the way you're writing it. Lovely portrayal of platonic love. ♥

Date: 2005-12-12 02:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com
*hugs you close* I'm sorry.

Here, this might make you feel better:

Heero leaned forward. He didn't need to feel Duo's hands, desperately pulling him closer to know what he needed to do. Heero would go slow, swallowing inch by inch in his own time, tasting and teasing for as long as he wanted before complying and finally letting Duo burry himself in his mouth. And then, Heero would open his eyes and watch as Duo came. With his mouth parted, his eyes half closed and drops of sweat traveling down the side of his face, Duo had never looked more beautiful.

Date: 2005-12-12 02:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it. This challenge is fun. You should try it.

Date: 2005-12-12 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com
Thank you. I'm glad the emotion came through.

Date: 2005-12-12 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com
I'm so glad to know the close friendship is showing. There are many ways to love and I do think they love each other deepely, even if there are no romantic feelings involved.

Date: 2005-12-12 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] merith.livejournal.com
oh wow... i'll make sure i'm weepy all the time if you'll write me nice little gems like this to make me smile :)

*hugs* thank you!

Date: 2005-12-12 02:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com
I just like making people smile, but don't abuse your power, you should use it only for good. *winks*

Date: 2005-12-12 02:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lil-1337.livejournal.com
I was toying with the idea. Not sure who I would do though.

Date: 2005-12-12 02:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com
You could try 3x4x5 or a friendship one like me. There's 4+5 and 3+4 and 1+4... or you could try 2x5... There are many number combinations to pick.

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