"The excitement! The danger! *bounces eagerly* While school!fic has been done many times (because it is ultra tempting) this has an action filled, amusing start."
Thank you very much. I wanted to do something different with the school fic setting. Hopefully it'll work.
You have managed to explain things without becoming tedious and keep people in character.
Thank you. I was worrying about giving too much information at once so it's good that it's flowing without it being tedious.
Hmm, I think he may be helping the attackers, after he holds the keys to the gate and is willing to back on any responsibility to the school (through he did go back of Quatre and Duo).
My lips are sealed.
Trowa doing acrobatics is a kink of mine too. I just loved it. It's important to the plot too.
Pairings will be developing more in the story, and well, you know I have a weakness for Quatre.
Thank you so much for the great feedback. *hugs you*
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Date: 2005-06-21 08:04 pm (UTC)Thank you very much. I wanted to do something different with the school fic setting. Hopefully it'll work.
Thank you. I was worrying about giving too much information at once so it's good that it's flowing without it being tedious.
My lips are sealed.
Trowa doing acrobatics is a kink of mine too. I just loved it. It's important to the plot too.
Pairings will be developing more in the story, and well, you know I have a weakness for Quatre.
Thank you so much for the great feedback. *hugs you*