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misanagi ([personal profile] misanagi) wrote2008-06-09 06:03 pm
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[Drabble] Sting

Sting

Quatre, Heero and Trowa friendship. Some angst. PG
For [livejournal.com profile] salamandere (sorry, I'm sure it turned out angstier than you wanted but I was in a weird mood)

"My sister used to be allergic to pollen. It was fine in the colonies, we don't get that many flowers anyway, but she wanted to come to Earth, wanted it so much. It killed her. A bee sting. She was allergic to bees too."

"Do you miss her?" Trowa asked.

Quatre looked up from his hand. It was swelling, fingers already twice it's size and turning an ugly purple color. "I never met her," he admitted. "Aisha told me about her. I think it was a warning. She knew I wanted to see Earth too."

"You are not allergic," Heero said, finally taking the sting from Quatre's finger.

"A bee can't kill a Gundam pilot," Trowa added, handing Heero the disinfectant.

"I guess not, but it can kill." Quatre looked down at the grass, to where the bee lay dead. "And it destroyed it."

"Killing always destroys." Heero applied the disinfectant to Quatre's hand and raised his eyes to look directly at him, "but we survived."

Quatre glanced at Trowa. "Barely."

Trowa fixed his eyes on Quatre's. "But we grew stronger."

"Strong enough to stop killing?" Quatre asked.

"Yes," assured Heero.

"Maybe," hoped Trowa.

"Yeah," said Quatre, unsure with whom he was agreeing. "Thank you," he smiled at the both of them and moved his fingers slowly. "It doesn’t hurt as much anymore."

[identity profile] waka-kouhai.livejournal.com 2008-06-10 12:20 am (UTC)(link)
¡Hola! Pasando a saludar, aunque leo poco, pues el inglés no es mi fuerte... :P

Qué lay tan bacano. ¿Tú hiciste el dibujo?

[identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com 2008-06-10 12:59 am (UTC)(link)
Hola! Gracias! No, yo no lo pinté, soy un completo desastre para dibujar. Pedí que me lo hicieran en la feria del libro y lo escanie. El fondo es un texture con unas pinceladas extra y pues lo escrito y todo que es de photoshop.

[identity profile] just-ruth.livejournal.com 2008-06-10 01:59 am (UTC)(link)
This is nice. It is a sad thing about the sister Quatre never knew. Well done!

[identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com 2008-06-10 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I feel sad about the sister too. It made Quatre very thoughtful. too.

[identity profile] lil-1337.livejournal.com 2008-06-10 06:24 am (UTC)(link)
I really liked the levels of meaning in the conversation.

[identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com 2008-06-10 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I turned a bit heavier than I had imagined the prompt to be.

[identity profile] salamandere.livejournal.com 2008-06-10 09:43 am (UTC)(link)
what a nice surprise to wake up and find this!
hehe, i like angst! especially how you've done it, with the feelings there, but hope as well. I really enjoyed how the 3 of them were working and talking seamlessly together--it's just how I imagine they would be after fighting a war together. Thanks so much mis, it's great! XDDDDD ♥

[identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com 2008-06-10 02:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I like for them to be friends and really close after the war. It just seems right that way. I'm glad that you liked it, even if it turned out heavier than what the prompt suggested.

[identity profile] merith.livejournal.com 2008-06-10 05:06 pm (UTC)(link)
oh man... so many layers here, and slightly different takes on the same subject.

lovely and poignant, you have done a wonderful job, mis. ♥

[identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com 2008-06-10 06:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh thank you so much! The boys were in a thoughtful mood ^^;;

[identity profile] caerfree.livejournal.com 2008-06-15 11:56 am (UTC)(link)
Oh oh oh! Usually I skip drabbles, but that was just lovely!!!

[identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com 2008-06-15 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you very much! I'm glad that you liked it.

[identity profile] tyreling.livejournal.com 2008-07-07 02:24 am (UTC)(link)
How did I miss this one? The story is very nice, thoughtful and sad at the same time. I like the tone of the fic and the way you displayed their friendship here. Nice job. ^^b

[identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com 2008-07-07 03:10 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I was in a weird mood that day. I'm glad that you liked it.