Sentence # 17

[misanagi]

17. Tears

After believing profoundly, for so many years, that boys don't cry, Duo had been very confused at how easily the tears came when he was with Quatre, and even more puzzled at how Quatre, instead of trying to make him stop, cried right along with him.

Comments

[sharona1x2.livejournal.com]

Sometimes, it's easier to do that with friends than with lovers. *hugs*

[misanagi.livejournal.com]

The first draft for this sentence was along the lines of Duo thinking how even though he's been with Heero for a long time, he still goes to Quatre when he needs to cry. But then I thought it sounded as if Heero wasn't understanding enough, which wasn't my intention at all, and since this was only supposed to be a sentence long, there was no time to explain. So I rewrote it ^_^ But I find it cool that you noticed the intention even though I didn't write it. *hugs*