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misanagi ([personal profile] misanagi) wrote2006-01-23 11:38 pm
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Sentence # 48

48. Waves

If there was something Quatre never got tired of watching it was the ocean, the vast expanse of water, so large that – no matter how many times he'd seen it – he found difficult to believe it existed; Duo had once told him that he'd felt the same until the day he sat on the beach and was visited by the waves… while the ocean was too big to comprehend, the waves, dying on the beach, were the only proof Duo needed of the ocean's existence.

[identity profile] arabianprincess.livejournal.com 2006-01-24 05:00 am (UTC)(link)
Excellent sentence, but there's only two left! They're almost done. *sad*

[identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com 2006-01-24 05:59 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm glad that you liked them. And yep, two more and I won't be spaming everyone's LJ every day... ^^;;

[identity profile] sharona1x2.livejournal.com 2006-01-24 07:55 am (UTC)(link)
I'm getting some very lovely visuals in my head from this one. ^_~

[identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com 2006-01-24 08:18 am (UTC)(link)
*smiles* Thank you, that's always good to hear. ^_^

[identity profile] chatona.livejournal.com 2006-01-24 07:41 pm (UTC)(link)
I can do that... Like... Sit on a rock near the ocean, freezing my ass off and just staring at the sea. For hours.

Loved the sentence very much but.. Is it true? Only two more left? (*gets knife and gun ready to force you to write more*)

[identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com 2006-01-25 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
It's nice, isn't it? I love watching the waves at the edge of a beach too.

Since I wrote one, apparently, there's only one left... *backs away slowly before you get the weapons*

[identity profile] lil-1337.livejournal.com 2006-01-25 03:51 am (UTC)(link)
That is a gorgeous visual. Somethings are so big the only way to wrap your head around them is a small piece at a time.

[identity profile] misanagi.livejournal.com 2006-01-25 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad that you like it. I have to confess I'm very impressed at the ocean that way too, because it's so big. I imagine that it would be even more for children who grew up in the colonies. Earth can be overwhelming, but we are so used to it that we rarely take the tome to stop and see.