I was trying a new style with this fic, something I've never tried before. The whole tone changes from detached to very introspective, as the same time as the action switched from present and future. The idea was not to be so explicit, make the description be more centered in emotions than in actions.

I'm glad that you enjoyed it and found it romantic, even if I went out of my way to take out all the sappy references and keep the word "love" to a minimum. It shows me that the idea worked.

Thanks a lot for the feedback!