Nevermind the coherency, it isn't going to happen. I really really loved this fic, though. I love how you wrote Fuji, and how Tezuka didn't understand how he was 'fun' because it just didn't make sense. I love how nervous they all are about which high school they have to go to, because it's such a junior high student thing to worry about and we don't really see enough of it, I don't think.

I also love how everyone's basically decided that Konomi's canon is basically just a suggestion that wasn't meant to be taken seriously. :P I like your fanon better anyway.