Ooo... Two of my favorite Gundam Wing authors teaming up for a breakfast club AU - I don't have a snowball's chance in hell of resisting. (Love the new background Mis, by the way).
The detail of this collaboration looks fabulous. I love the way that you capture the scene by creating a sense of room and movement and color. I can picture Heero scowling at his car and the other students looking at him quizzically. I also love the way in which you incorporate both points of view without making the transitions awkward or strained. I like to know what they are both thinking, and it is nice to see it done so well. Their thoughts about each other are both humorous and painful, especially considering the time frame of this story.
I'm very excited that this project is taking root once again. I can't think of anyone more suited for the job than the two of you - I'll be expecting great things :). Thank you for writing and for sharing!
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The detail of this collaboration looks fabulous. I love the way that you capture the scene by creating a sense of room and movement and color. I can picture Heero scowling at his car and the other students looking at him quizzically. I also love the way in which you incorporate both points of view without making the transitions awkward or strained. I like to know what they are both thinking, and it is nice to see it done so well. Their thoughts about each other are both humorous and painful, especially considering the time frame of this story.
I'm very excited that this project is taking root once again. I can't think of anyone more suited for the job than the two of you - I'll be expecting great things :). Thank you for writing and for sharing!